There are quite a few things wrong here.
the question is, where to start?
1. content, the translations you have are nothing you can't get in a basic guide book.
2. spelling, not a lot, but some words are not correctly spelled out.
3. Wrong translations, здравствуйте - Hello ... привет - Hi.
if required to address customs officers or police officers "привет" is NOT acceptable (I know this as fact, Moscow Militia do NOT have good humour)

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